| 2005/07/25 21:58:32 PDT by Dominic |
Clarification Question: I wasn't sure if Boona was African American or white. She is African American right?
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"Seventh Grade" by Lynda Barry
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| 2005/07/25 22:00:56 PDT by Dominic |
I don't agree with this "story." Everyone in my middle school was uniting after a summer absence. We were very happy we get to see each other and share our experiences by talking with each other rather than not saying a word like the story.
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| 2005/07/26 09:19:23 PDT by Moriah |
yeah i dont agree ether it was interesting. and some friends do leave each other but still come on i know friends like that bu tit dosent mean it happens to everybody
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| 2005/07/26 10:53:52 PDT by koki |
this story is quite interesting..its kinda random too.
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| 2005/07/26 10:55:49 PDT by koki |
yeah..i think i read this before or maybe it was something else..anyway, this story is like showing students like our age about the friendship changes in middle and high school. well, that's what i think. and there were a lot of new rules and stuff for all the new students to that school.
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| 2005/07/26 10:57:33 PDT by koki |
overall, i think this mini-piece of writing can get interesting at some point like when the girl slaps the other girl in the bathroom and stuff, but everything else was kinda boring.
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| 2005/07/26 11:09:47 PDT by nobody |
First I didn't know who Bonna was because she just mentioned her name out of nowhere.
| 2005/07/26 11:11:06 PDT by nobody |
And I didn't get why the main character got in trouble too.
| 2005/07/26 13:36:13 PDT by jetaway |
Quote from Moriah:
yeah i dont agree ether it was interesting. and some friends do leave each other but still come on i know friends like that bu tit dosent mean it happens to everybody
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| 2005/07/26 13:36:31 PDT by jetaway |
Quote from koki:
this story is quite interesting..its kinda random too.
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| 2005/07/26 13:38:17 PDT by jetaway |
Koki and Moriah, please repost your comments in a formal tone. That means you don't use "kinda," or "stuff." You need to explain yourself more thoroughly. You might even have to write a paragraph! I will delete your old posts once you have posted fresh ones.
| 2005/07/26 17:16:59 PDT by StevenChen |
I think that the story was interesting, and I experienced the same changes, just not as extremely as the main character. The story was hard to understand, it was like jumping into a book without any understanding of the previous storyline.
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| 2005/07/26 17:42:58 PDT by nobody |
I know. I don't get why they weren't friends anymore.
| 2005/07/26 20:21:23 PDT by SADHANA |
The story was okay. I dont think that the plot was that great though. I agree with Dominic, most people don't act that way on the first day of school. The story was not very realistic, but it was still interesting.
The story never mentioned when they were friends, and how they aren't friends anymore. I also didn't like it how the other girl was getting beat up by Bonna, and they story never showed Bonna getting in much trouble.
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| 2005/07/26 21:34:00 PDT by Dominic |
Did anyones's first day of seventh grade "run" like that? I know mines hasn't.
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