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Moriah Hodges
The Writing Process
Persuasive Letter
July 7, 2005

PERSUASIVE LETTER

Dear Mom and Dad,

I-pods are the greatest portable CD players. Everyone I know has

one. Mini I-pods regular I-pods you name it they have it all. Now I know were not

followers but leaders in this family we do not do everything everyone else does.

For example you jump off a bridge does not mean I jump off a bridge. You have

been telling me for the longest time that if I really wanted something that I should

work for it. And I agree but what if I wanted this I-pod really bad. I would need a

job and well I do not know many jobs that allow twelve year old girls to work for

them. What will I do then? How will I get the money? Save my money for five

more years? That is way to long. What if I work around the house would you let

me?

I know that we are not followers but leaders in this family and I respect

that. But a lot of people have I-pods and I’ve really want one. Now yes a CD

player is less expensive but I do listen to a verity of music as you already know.

You might say “maybe you’ll get it for your birthday” or “Well maybe your father

and I have to think about this” and five months later end up forgetting or just right
off the bat say no.

I understand your concerns but Here’s why we are soon leaving for Cancun

and if I’m correct it takes the same amount of time to go to Hawaii. That’s about

five hours! They don’t show the movies until three hours into the flight. What do I

do while waiting for the movie to come on? Color, read magazines, sleep, argue

with Elijah and I know you don’t want that. So why not get me an I-pod dad has

one and well he’s like me a music fanatic just like me. So, instead of bugging dad

every two minutes why not get me an I pod now so you don’t have to listen to me

the whole trip to Cancun. Don’t forget that I will work for it.

What if I work for it? It would be a good learning experience. If I remember

correctly dad is always saying he used to work at my age. If dad worked for stuff

at my age why shouldn’t I?

I-pods are very popular for teens and adults. I understand that you would

be worried about me losing it but trust me if I work for it I will appreciate this I-pod

a lot more. So can I please work for this I-pod that I really want?

Your eldest,
Moriah

p.s. this is the color and kind of I-pod I want:

THERES A PICTURE HERE