The Writing Process (Sec. 6)
The Writing Process
Posted by jetaway at 2005/07/28 20:36:27 PDT

Congrats on a job well done! You all worked very hard this summer and the results are pretty stunning. You have improved so much. I'm just reading the last of the interpretive essays, but by and large, they saw big improvements since Monday.

Now, get out there and relax, play, swim, and be full of summer before the school year starts! You deserve it.

Our virtual classroom will remain on the web if you want to check in with each other throughout the year. Drop me an email from time to time because I love to hear how my students are doing.

Best of luck,

Ms. Thomas


Posted by jetaway at 2005/07/25 17:22:53 PDT

Hi,

I forgot to mention in class today that if you would like your literary analysis essay returned to you with my final comments, you have two options:

Option #1: Bring a manila SASE (Self-addressed, stamped, envelope) to class on Thursday. Make sure the envelope is addressed to you and has sufficient postage on it for me to mail your essay. This will be at least 2-3 stamps, but may be more.

Option #2: I can leave the essays in the ATDP office for you to pick up on your own, but you must do this before the end of August because ATDP is planning some major cleaning out of things and your essay will be tossed.

That's all, folks.

Ms. Thomas


Posted by jetaway at 2005/07/22 10:29:38 PDT

Ladies and Gentlemen,

As you work on revising your argumentative essay, you should download and study the rubric I've just posted on the "Grading Rubrics" section. This will show you how I decided on your grade so you can make the necessary changes to bring up your grade. You have to download the file. I highly recommend doing this, and Moriah has suggested the same in her post in that section. Good luck!


Posted by jetaway at 2005/07/15 09:48:43 PDT

Dear Students:

This is an official pep-talk! I want to let you all know that you are doing a wonderful job at ATDP. I know that many of you have expressed being stressed out or feeling over-worked. I encourage you to complete the poll that is listed under the "Let's Talk" section. I need to know how much homework you are really doing in order to make changes. Remember that posting friendly comments to you classmates on this website does not count as time spent on homework. It's easy to get sucked into the web, so be careful (I know because it happens to me all the time).

While this course is challenging, I don't want you to feel stressed out. If you have 3-6 hour of homework between class sessions, try to find a way to break up your time. Spend three hours each day, for example. Tackle your writing assignments first so that you can step away from them for a whole day if possible.

Most of you are putting in the time and energy you need to be successful in a course like this that moves quickly, and quite frankly, is not ideal for a writing course. If you aren't, you know who you are and I just want to remind you that while you might not see immediate returns, you'll notice them in the fall when writing doesn't feel like something from last year, but rather something you are warmed up and ready to go with!

Keep your head up. Get plenty of sleep and sunshine. And, above all, remember that while this class is important, it is not life or death and it will not break your academic future if you don't get an A+.

Okay, pep-talk over. Now, I have to go give myself a similar pep-talk because I'm working too hard, here ;-)

Happy weekend,

Ms. Thomas


Posted by jetaway at 2005/07/07 20:45:54 PDT

I have a couple of reminders for your all:

-If you don't have permission, I'll be deleting your name and work from the website. You can still read postings, but unfortunately you won't be able to participate.

-Please keep any "off-topic" talk to the "Let's Talk" and "Chat Chat Chat" sections. If you are posting something that you need me to see, make sure you aren't putting it in "Let's Talk" because there's a good chance I won't see it.

-Please refrain from long conversations with friends on this website. If you aren't addressing everyone, it's polite to send the individual an email, make a phone call, or chat on an instant messanger service.

-I will be gone from email and my telephone from Friday afternoon until Monday morning. Of course, I will be available during hotline hours Monday morning if you have a burning question.


Posted by jetaway at 2005/07/07 08:45:37 PDT

I sent an email about this yesterday but there is currently a communication issue between berkeley.edu and yahoo.com. Those of you with yahoo mail have probably not received these tips. Please read them carefully and adjust your assignment accordingly.

Dear Students who went on the field trip today:

I've received many questions about your "assignment" to write a thank you letter to Henry. Let me explain more fully so you know what is expected of you. As you know, when someone does something nice for you, it's a good idea to thank them. Thank you notes are going out of style, but they are still welcomed and appreciated. I'd like each of you to write Henry a thank you note. Please do not follow regular "assignment" procedure on this. In other words, do NOT include a heading. You want Henry to feel that you genuinely want to thank him and would send him a note on your own even if I did not ask you to do it! I strongly encourage you to handwrite a short note on a notecard or piece of stationary. If you want to design a short note on your computer, that is fine too. This is not an essay, but a piece of mail! Remember to be specific about the tour. Tell him something your learned of what you liked most about the day. Be as specific as possible. Be sure to sign your name. You can sign off with words like, "Sincerely," "Warmly," "With thanks," etc.

Please bring your thank you notes tomorrow. If yours goes in its own envelope, do not seal the envelope.

See you soon,

Ms. Thomas

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