Writing for HS, AM (Scalice, '07)
Simon Ho
Posted by sho at 2007/06/28 19:17:07 PDT
Edited at 2007/06/28 19:18:07 PDT
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School is a place where we all learn. We learn to comprehend the world in school. My school is big, serves great food, and is an excellent place to learn. My school could be described as a study empire.
First of all, my school is really big. Many classrooms could be seen as far as the eye can see when stepping on the campus. It is made of many big, brown, buildings. The giant plain of lush, green grass circles the whole campus. The insides of the classrooms are filled with the cold, sweet aroma of fresh air-conditioned air. The playgrounds are constantly being filled with children and high-scholars enjoying themselves outside. Our school consists of approximately 1000 people, ranging from kindergarteners to high-school seniors. It is also frequently loud outside and usually quiet in the classrooms. Also my school also spent a lot of money on fancy trashcans. The trashcans are brown and are covered with fancy rocks, but it is an ordeal to actually throw away trash in them so litter covers the floor around the cans.
Secondly, the cafeteria in my school serves good food. Great-tasting, quality food is always present. It ranges from pizza to fried rice to meat loaf. Aside from the great food, there are always kids eating and chatting inside the white-walled, red curtained place. People keep going in and out quickly, getting food then leaving, though quite a few stay to make conversation with friends. The cafeteria is also our school’s auditorium and can be filled with benches at times and cushiony red chairs at another time. Gray fans hang from the ceilings and keep people cool.
Lastly, my school is a great place to learn. Most of the teachers tutor students for free and is a great learning experience for most students. Of course, the students have to study to get the grade, but caring teachers make the process easy. Like said before, the classrooms are usually quiet and the majority of the students take learning seriously. The rooms are especially quiet besides the rustling of papers and the clicking of pens when test time comes around. The teachers are mostly kind people and some allow kids to listen to ipods and mp3s when working. Some teachers tell stories during class and are sometimes amusing. The desks are smooth and the chairs are quite rough. The carpet is feels okay to walk on.

In conclusion, my school is a great place to learn. The place is big and is pretty fancy, serves grand tasting food in the cafeteria, and is an overall great place to learn.


Posted by sho at 2007/06/28 10:40:38 PDT
Edited at 2007/06/28 18:43:49 PDT
Descrpitive essay

School is a place where we learn to comprehend the world. My school has about 950 students, serves great food, and is an excellent place to learn. It is a study empire.

My school is extremely large. Many classrooms can be seen when stepping on the campus. It is composed of many big, brown buildings. Gian plains of lush, green grass circles the whole campus. The insides of the classrooms are filled with the cold, sweet aroma of fresh air-conditioned air. Children and high-schoolers are constantly enjoying the playgrounds outside. Our school has approxiamately 1000 people, ranging from kinderarteners to high-school seniors. It is often loud outside and quiet in the classrooms. My school spent a lot of money on fancy trashcans. The trashcans are brown and are covered with rocks, but it is an ordeal to actually place trash in them; litter covers the floor around the cans.

The white-walled, red curtained cafeteria in my school serves good food. Great-tasting, quality food always ready to eat. It ranges from pizza to fried rice to meat loaf. Kids are always there eating and chatting. People go in and out quickly, getting food and leaving, though quite a few stay to convere with friends. the cafeteria also serves as our school's aouditorium and can be filled with benches or cushioned red chairs. Gray fans hang from the ceilings and keep people cool.

My school is a great place to learn. Most of the teachers tutor students for free and the tutoring is a great learning experience for most students. Of course, the students have to study to get good grades, but caring teachers make the process easy. The majority of the students take learning seriously. Only the rustling of papers and the clicking of pens can be heard at test time. The teachers are kind people and allow students to listen to ipods and mp3s while they are working. Teachers tell stories during class and are amusing. The desks are smooth and the chairs are quite rough.

Overall i feel that my school is an ideal place to learn. It is also nice to make friends there and we have lots of fun learning.


Posted by sho at 2007/06/28 10:19:19 PDT
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