What the author is saying is that the world has turned into a horrible place. Robberies, poverty, global warming and suffering are some examples. Most of the terrible things that are happening are usually human caused. It's not that we do not have enough but other people have too much. We now define people by how rich and poor they are. How come laborers barely get any money when they do all the work for the rich? What has happened to our consciences? Have we become so corrupeted that we only think and care about ourselves? We need to make room for change and take action. However before we change what we have caused we must change ourselves. We have to stop talking about change and actually take action.

I am persuaded by this worldview because the given evidence is mostly true. However I disagree with some of the authors details. The author implied that the rich is one of our problems. I don't think that it's just them but the poor too. Some people have quit school to get a job but they couldn't get one because they had limited education. Is it the rich people's fault that they quit school? Also the events happening are not only caused but some are unfortuanete circumstances. We have no control of what's going to happen and of our birth. If I were to write such an essay, one of the basic premises of it would be that those wo ignore situations are part of the problem as well because they don't do anything that stop it. I would also list more examples about how the world is turning worse everyday.