#1.) I was fortunately still in the wings and could go over the steps but I lacked enough time to review my whole dance, but I walked onto the black floored stage with a big grin on my face.

#2.) tangable noun- can hold or touch or is an object
box, chair, table, rose, hersey chocolate, cloud, earings, computer, water, apple

intangable noun- abstract things
dreams, thoughts, stinky, hope, destiny, feeeling, sight, love, hope, wisdom, sarcassim

Metaphors (using of)

rose of destiny
the table of hope
a cloud of dreams
chocolate of love
an apple of sarcassim
a box of thoughts

Metaphor (uing is, are, has, 's,)
cloud's dreams
box are thounghs
chocolate has love
hate is an anchor
love is a battlefield

The word: Yellow

Yellow is the color that radiates from the sun and shines down on the earth. It is also assosiated with making people laugh. A banana peel is yellow and when someone steps on it they can slip and fall. It is the tool for a good humorous joke. Yellow is on my shirt and is the color that always brightens up my day. Everyone loves the color yellow and it can lighten peoples' hearts. Life is yellow and because it brings joy to everyone and can make them want to live.

The word: Chocolate

Chocolate is love because it makes people happy. The brown bar when slipped into a mouth melts into a lushous river of thick delishous goodness. It makes everyone happy with its abundance of sugar and caffine.

Corrections:
Nice description of how it melting. The description makes my stomach growl in hunger.

Thank you.

The word: flower
Flower power! It can be a symbol of love or lies. A flower can smell good or it can smell as bad as a skunk. Some flowers eat flies or fingers. They are thought of being harmless but in horror movies are man eating plants of danger and fear. Roses are beautiful to look at but are dangerous to the touch.

final paragraph

Flowers, chocolate and yellow bring joy to everyone. You can also eat all of them. When someone writes about them it makes them hungery so they might eat some. Unfortunately, like anything else they can be dangerous. Flowers can be piossonis when eaten, chocolate can make people sick if they eat too much and a yellow banana peel can cause someone to slip and hurt their back or butt.

Meaningful words:
joy
banana peel
man eating plant
melting
laugh
chocolate

The chocolate fed the man eating plant so the laughing men did not get eaten instead. When the father slipped on the banana peel, joy spread throughout the hearts if the family then melted into fear when the fater could not get up.