Writing for HS, AM (Scalice, '07)
Rajaram Patel
Posted by RPatel at 2007/07/11 11:20:57 PDT

I have never seen this movie and I probably will not. I dislike films directed by Quentin Tarantino. Kill Bill and Kill BIll 2 were just wierd and freaky and the movie Reservior Dogs was just wierd and freaky. I agree with the author that the movie did not come out at a great time. I do not agree with the author that we are living in a Sin City or decaying society. I think our society has a few bad problems that can be fixed. Not all people are vicious killers or other sorts of criminals. I have to disagree that these films are to get American minds accustomed to torture and murder of one's enemy. I think that these directors had problems in their childhoods or some kind of tradegy. Thats why they write about and direct to express their feelings, not to brainwash people into thinking torture is right to use on enemies.

I also do not think that many adults take these films to seriously. The people who actually watch and enjoy these films are usually teenagers. They are the ones who like watching movies about torture. They also like watching movies that are extremely gory. I like watching some gory movies, like 300 which I really enjoyed. I really think that these films have nothing to do with the decaying of our society. Maybe some people will take these movies into their heads and actually start killing, but the majority of people aren't about to suddenly start a life of crime.


Posted by RPatel at 2007/07/08 13:54:56 PDT

This is a interesting essay. I can't say I understood all of it because there were some parts that I did not get. Jose makes some valid arguements in this essay. "This suffering and misery is not a sad twist of fate, not the result of unfortunate circumstances - it is caused. Oppression and exploitation have caused hunger, suffering and death in the world." I think this is very true. I think that if many people did cause the world to go hungry and suffer, that people should now help and make the world a better place for everybody. Paragraph five is a very moving paragraph to me. I agree that any workers have been exploited to make products cheaper. I do not understand how their, "sweat, their blood, and their life which have produced the symbols of selfishness that are mansions and Hummers." I think what Jose is trying to say is that many people who take advantage of the labor of millions are usually very rich and so do not care about the millions of people that they have ripped off.

Why is our present society in the wrong? I have to agree with Jose that it is the wrong, but why? We have had so many acheivements in this century. Lots of new and improved items have some out our society. Why is it that our society is in the wrong when so many things gave some out right. Many people think it is in the wrong because of all the people who do not have anything to eat when they get home form tedious and hard work. I think Jose is right that to build a world that works we need to give to each person whatever they NEED not want and pay according to their labor. Lots of people do not trust people as Jose stated, I do not believe that i will ever get to the poiont where we thin that it is ok to kill. I do believe that rasicm will get worse and worse and that we will not trust people of a certain race. I think that Jose makes a valid point that the world is getting worse and worse.


Posted by RPatel at 2007/07/05 11:54:39 PDT

little , just, tad bit,

He takes the first pitcht a little bit outside for a ball.

He takes the first pitch as it curves outside for a ball.

He takes the first pitch just outside

Another writing exercise

baseball, football, beer bottle, bottle cap, paper cup, mud, brown sugar, chocolate chips

truth, passion, dreams, thought, love, guilt, hate, emotions, wisdom, joy

The flung mud of hate

Herman is an ant who lives off of bananas. His colony is out of bananas so he must wander off into the world to find his banana otherwise he will die. He wanders in to the world not knowing what lies before him. His whole quest is to find the yellow banana to keep him alive.

Hugo is a chubby kid who eats all the time. His favorite food is chocolatete
At the "chocolate" in the third sentence, you put a comma. After that is a list, so you should change it to a colon. When you were describing Hugo, you put "chubby" You could replace "chubby" with a more descriptive word, like fat or obeese(sp?).

Water is the best drink to drink in my opinion. When my throat yts dry, I always go and get chilled water and it feels extraordinary as it rushes down my parched throat.

As I peel the yellow cover off of the chocolate my stomach begins to growl with hunger. When I am finished with my chocolate my mouth feels unusually dry and I get a glass of water and the cool water.

chubby, chilled, banana, extraordinary when it rushes down my parched

The chubby kid ate the chilled banana, but it was actually a yellow pepper so he drank tub fulls of water and it felt extraordinary as it rushed down his mouth.


Posted by RPatel at 2007/06/28 11:28:34 PDT
Edited at 2007/06/29 20:09:52 PDT
Stuff

Pandemonium runs through the crowd. The bases are loaded in the bottom of the first with two outs. The opposing pitcher appears nervous as he walks around the mound. He reaches down to touch the rosen bag and rubs up the baseball. Eric Chavez strides slowly and menacingly up to the plate. The crowd is on their feet. The pitcher winds up and lets the ball fly from his hand; everybody holds their breath as Chavez takes for a called strike. He steps out of the batters box and takes a deep breath. He catches a glimpse of the third base coach's signs, but doesn't care as he focused on getting a run home any way he can. The second pitch is on the way; Chavez takes a huge cut but comes up with nothing but air. There are two strikes now. Fans are getting antsy and wondering if Chavez can do anything. The pitcher's confidence is revitalized and he pours a fastball and Chavez swings right through it and the fans are quieted. Chavez throws his helmet down in digust as the A's take the field.

The score is 3-0 Angels on top as the A's come to bat in the bottom of fifth inning. Mark Ellis leads off, the fans have lost interest in the game. They have begun to talk amoung themselves and to get food instead of watching the game. Mark Ellis swings and hits the first pitch to deep left. People begin to look up and slowly follow the flight of the towering drive. As the ball goes over the fence, people get up on their feet and start cheering. People suddenly think that the A's could come back and win the game. Crosby follows Ellis, swinging at the first pitch and grounding out to the shortstop. Kendall then works the count to 3-2 but then hits a fly ball to left and the left fielder easily catches the ball and the inning was over.

Kotsay leads off the bottom of the ninth by hammering a fastball to right field for a single. The Angels pitcher has a look of worry on his face as he has Swisher to work with. He gets Swisher to strike out with five pitches, but the next batter Johnson works his way on base with a walk and Eric Chavez now comes up with a chance to something. Chavez comes representing the game-winning run. He takes the first pitch and takes it a little bit outside for a ball. The pitcher looks in disbelief at the plate umpire that he did not get the call. He goes back to the mound and rifles the pitch for strike one. Chavez steps out, takes a deep breath and stands back in the box. He glares at the pitcher as the pitcher winds up and pitches one just outside; again he looks in disbelief that he did not get the call he wanted. He winds up and the pitch ends up in the dirt, the count is now three and one. The pitcher winds up and throws it right down the middle for strike two. The crowd gets up on to their feet and starts cheering louder and louder. The pitcher takes a huge breath and winds up and throws the ball. The fans watch the ball from the pitchers hand and keep watching as Chavez swings and sends it high and deep to right fiel. The fans are holding their breath as the ball lands in the bleachers the fans explode with delight and the A's mob Chavez as he hits a walk off bomb.

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