little , just, tad bit,

He takes the first pitcht a little bit outside for a ball.

He takes the first pitch as it curves outside for a ball.

He takes the first pitch just outside

Another writing exercise

baseball, football, beer bottle, bottle cap, paper cup, mud, brown sugar, chocolate chips

truth, passion, dreams, thought, love, guilt, hate, emotions, wisdom, joy

The flung mud of hate

Herman is an ant who lives off of bananas. His colony is out of bananas so he must wander off into the world to find his banana otherwise he will die. He wanders in to the world not knowing what lies before him. His whole quest is to find the yellow banana to keep him alive.

Hugo is a chubby kid who eats all the time. His favorite food is chocolatete
At the "chocolate" in the third sentence, you put a comma. After that is a list, so you should change it to a colon. When you were describing Hugo, you put "chubby" You could replace "chubby" with a more descriptive word, like fat or obeese(sp?).

Water is the best drink to drink in my opinion. When my throat yts dry, I always go and get chilled water and it feels extraordinary as it rushes down my parched throat.

As I peel the yellow cover off of the chocolate my stomach begins to growl with hunger. When I am finished with my chocolate my mouth feels unusually dry and I get a glass of water and the cool water.

chubby, chilled, banana, extraordinary when it rushes down my parched

The chubby kid ate the chilled banana, but it was actually a yellow pepper so he drank tub fulls of water and it felt extraordinary as it rushed down his mouth.