Writing for HS, AM (Scalice, '07)
Posted by jrowland at 2007/07/05 11:55:30 PDT

Yellow is the color pineapples. The color of the sun's bright rays. Yellow is the color of triumph and also of defeat.

Chocolate: chocolate is the edible brown substance that heals a broken heart. It is my escape to happiness. Chocolate can be liquified, purified, and frozen to perfection! =)
EMILY EDITING:
-take out the word 'substance' and use a different word
-the 2nd sentence instead of using chocolate again to begin the sentence use 'it'
-and the 3rd sentence begin it with Chocolate again

ROSE:

Roses tend to be the most popular flower. The red rose is usually non wilted, ageless, and has no thorns. To me, however the perfect rose would be wilted and would be browning, with many thorns. By showing its imperfections, it is showing the reality of life and how it takes a toll on each and every thing. In the negative or positive aspect. A rose tends to be the icon of everlasting life.

all three subjects of the matter: chocolate, yellow and a rose all have one key thing in common. all are colors. chocolate is a brown color and yellow is self explanitory. rose is a pretty pink color.

ageless, a rose tends to be the icon of everlasting life., triumph and defea

triumph and defeat are life's battles and as the dodge commercial says, we must "take life by the horns."

a rose tends to be the icon of everlasting life.

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