Writing for HS, AM (Scalice, '07)
Holly Qiu
Posted by hqiu at 2007/07/21 17:01:34 PDT
America is in the heart by Carlos Bulosan

Discovering his America

To Bulosan, America is a world filled with hope, opportunities and struggles. There is freedom in America. Bulosan struggles to survive and works to earn money for himself. He is confused with the thought of America and has a blurred path to follow. He strives to keep a promise with America, striving to create the promise. He describes his hardships and struggles to survive in this country. When he realizes that America is the promise and he is striving to create it.

The people he has met at America have helped and destroyed his dream. His brothers have helped him through his journey but yet have been a bad influence to him. His brother, Leon, for example, in the beginning of the book, showed the strength in oneself, by going through the beating when supposedly the wife was not a virgin. Then he was forced to move out of the village due to shame and humiliation felt.

He later again saw him in the bus waving good bye for the last time. Leon is not mention in the book anymore. His whole family struggles to make a living and to pay off their burden and to help his older brother finish up school.

There is a quotation on page 14 that demonstrates the sacrifices given to help Macario, his older brother. The quote is:
Popular education was spreading throughout the archipelago and this opened up new opportunities. It was new and democratic system brought by American government into the Philippines and a nation hitherto illiterate and backward was beginning to awaken. In Spanish times education was something that belonged exclusively to the rulers and to some fortunate natives affluent enough to go to Europe. But poor people, the peasants, were denied even the most elementary schooling. When the free education that United States had introduced spread throughout the islands, every family who had a son pooled its resources and sent him to school.
The free education in the U.S. is very important, it foreshadows that Bulosan will go to the States to try to receive an education. And the family will try their best to help them. It showed how the Philippines were oppressed by Spanish and that the education only belonged to the rulers and natives.

Another quote demonstrates the struggle that Bulosan and his family went through to help support his other brother, Marcario.

We had deprived ourselves of any form of leisure and simple luxury so that my brother could finish high school. But even then he kept asking for more money, threatening that he would stop if we did not send him enough. The thought that he would really stop terrified us. (pg.15)

Bulosan uses the word “deprived”, meaning to remove or withhold something from the enjoyment or possession of a person. This word is very strong and meaningful. There was no leisure or any form of enjoyment because they had to sacrifice them for his brother. But yet his brother continued to ask the family for more money. They were terrified when he threatened to stop continuing his education when no money was received.
This quote "We in America understand the many imperfections of democracy and the malignant disease corroding its very heart. We must be united in the effort to make an America in which our people can find happiness. It is a great wrong that anyone in America, whether he be brown or white, should be illiterate or hungry or miserable."

In the last chapter, pg. 326, Bulosan ends with this paragraph, quoting:

Then I heard bells ringing from the hills-like the bells that had tolled in the church tower when I left Binalonan. I glanced out of the window again to look at the broad land I had dreamed so much about, only to discover with astonishment that the American earth was like a huge heart unfolding warmly to receive me. I felt it spreading through my being, warming me with its glowing reality. It came to me that no man-no one at all- could destroy my faith in America again. It was something that had grown out of my defeats and successes, something shaped by my struggles for a place in this vast land, digging my hands into rich soil here and there, catching a freight to north and to the south, seeking free meals in dingy gambling houses, reading a book that opened up worlds of heroic thoughts. It was something that grew out of sacrifices and loneliness of my friends, of my brothers in America and my family in the Philippines- something that grew out of our desire to know America, and to become part of her great tradition, and to contribute something toward her final fulfillment. I knew that no man could destroy my faith in America that had sprung from all our hopes and aspirations, ever.

This quote really touches me. It shows how much faith he had in America and how much he was willing to give. He continuously says “No man could destroy my faith in America.” He believes that this country will fulfill his promise to the world. He is so touched by his own and others struggles, sacrifices and hopes in America. Everything he has been through was through his own true will. All that he has given is for dream of fulfilling America’s promise. He believes America is in the Heart. It is up to you, you inside, deep down in your soul, to create the promise. And you to change it. Through this book he has enveloped so much, he has showed what he contributed to America and its promise. But through, the promise, he also faced reality, which is filled with the struggles he went through and the sacrifices that he faced. He, now, truly understands America is in the heart. He understands hope and aspirations, what he has accomplish.

His journey was through thorns and roses or as he quotes “his defeats and successes”. It is something that shaped him as a person. It has changed him to become a better person and to accomplish his goals. He has showed what he contributed to make America to its fulfillment. He knows that no man could ever destroy his hope, faith and dreams in America or what America has become. Bulosan has made the ending of this book, so touching, so heart filling, so close, so personal, so deep, that it is something that really makes you think and question what is America is in the heart. What is Bulosan trying to tell us? He has showed us the light of America but also the dark side. He demonstrates so much through this book. He takes the readers, the audience in to feel his pain and depression but also his faith in America. He has created a promise to fulfill and he is touched by the heart of others and how they have been touched by his. Through his writing, he is hoping to show people what America is. And he is hoping people can realize the promise and the reality faced in America. Bulosan writes to express his thoughts an feelings hoping other people can understand and feel the way he does about America’s promise. The promise in which you have to discover yourself. You have to discover your own true self and just listen to your heart. His writing has really been so deep and touching and how he struggled to become a writer. His desire to learn and be educated was huge from beginning to end of book. There was always hope in his life, he always had a desire to learn and write. This book is one of my favorites. It has showed me to not take things for granted and to know that they are many less fortunate people than you. Bulosan was very poor when he came to America, in hopes of a dream. This dream and promise began when in Pg. 69
“Who is Abraham Lincoln?” I asked Dalmacio.
“He was a poor boy who became a president of the United States,” he said. “He was born in a log cabin and walked miles to borrow a book so that he would know more about his country.”
This gives him hope that a “poor man” like him, can become someone powerful and have a strong opinion in which many people will listen to him. Bulosan is hoping to become someone like that. It gives him hope and strength.


Posted by hqiu at 2007/07/16 10:46:05 PDT

Why did they go to the Waig?

Father asking Did they see anyone on the way?

What is connection between Leon and Neol?

Is the relationship between Neol and wife of Leon?

How old are Leon and Neol?

How old is Baldo?

Who is Nagrebcan?

What is the fields?

Why do they start singing the song "Sky Sown with Stars"?

Who is Labang?

Why did the father raise his voice after Baldo said She is very beautiful, he said Was she afraid of Labang?

Where did they come from?

Where do they live?

did they arrive at the village?

How did the wife and Leon meet?

What is the relationship between Leon and Neol?

Why did the father question them on going through the fields?

Maria has different names. Leon into Neol.

Maria stays the same name throughout the whole thing.

Author assumes that we understand the Phiillippines.

When she sees stars laughter goes out of her?

She afraid that the father will not accept her in home.

He started singing and taught her the song.

The father
is testing to see if Maria will fit in.
Seeing if Maria would accept the field envrionment
instead of the city envrionment.
She is making the effort to fit in.
Tears of joy, to try to understand.
that father is dying.
but yet she trys.

pursue an idea in America

Pharse them into question

He doesn't want people to get in his personal life.

Themes:

Country and City

Question:
What do city/country mean for author's name?
How does city affect countrylife in the America is in the heart and How my bro. brought home a wife?

Bulosan doesnt like the traditions.
Arguilla likes the traditions, interesting.
QUESTION: What does America mean to Bulosan?

city adapting in the country in Maria.

It is about to.


Posted by hqiu at 2007/07/11 14:54:35 PDT
7/12/07

This movie review was quite interesting to read. It showed not only what the "Sin City" movie was about but it showed the underlying or deeper meaning to the movie. There is a part in the movie review that I especially liked reading about, I enjoyed it because it made sense to me and I was in agreement. In this paragraph, the author states that : "I believe that this film, at its core, underneath, the violet veneer, is yet another story about people's undying sense that things are not right with the world. That we all, in fact, live in Sin City. And, going further, it's also yet another story about our undying sense that we need to be saved from such a place, because we won't be able to do it alone. That we all need a knight in shining armor. That we all need God. As such, "Sin City" is a great movie to rip apart......a methaphor that I hope the directors are proud of."

Even though, I have not watched the movie, this movie review has helped me understand the underlying meaning of it. From the previous quote that the author of the review said was understandable. Let me take it sentence by sentence, so I can show you the undying meaning. In the beginning, he starts out by stating that there is a undying meaning and that there is another story underneath the movie itself. He states that we all live in Sin City and that we need to saved from this place. Wow. This is deep. From the movie review, I image the movie to be very violet and inappropriate with the blood and glory with lots of killing, revenge and anger. But, when he says we live in this kind of world. That is really deep. Who could image that we the people, who blindly live our lives, not knowing what is happening to our world and the people in it, live in this "Sin city." I agree with it because its true. The reason that we people are so irgonant is because we choose not to learn or understand the world surrounding us, or we are just too lazy and busy with our own lifestyles to even care about what is happening to our surroundings. Next, the author says that we need to be saved from this place. This is quite another statement that really touches me.

It shows that we first need to adknowledge our positions and then learn how to change, survive, and escape out of this world. To change and be saved. So then the author states that we can't be saved unless we have a knight and shining armor, which he also quotes that is God. Here, I am unsure with his meaning. How could God save us? We need to help ourselves and change ourselves from this world. We need to change peoples minds and opinions about everything and everyone. We need to take away greed, anger, jealously, strave for power. But how? Humans are born natural in that way. We all at times, feel angry, jealous or greedy. So if God micraously came to save us. How will we change, unless he created us differently. Then we would have a new human race? Or will humans exist again? What if we don't get another chance to change? God can't be our knight and shining armor. It doesn't work. We need to start by changning ourselves and the people around us.

I wanted to point out that paragraph because it was important. To me, that was the most important piece in the article. It showed me the underlying meaning of the whole movie itself. It made me want to discover what the movie was really about. Our world, may eventually, be like Sin city, or better yet, it is already. So going back to the whole movie review, the beginning did not really please me, it described how the people were killed. Thats disgusting, no one needs three paragraphs on that. Then when he started discussing the concidental date that it came out. I thought that was also important because it leads to him talking about God and Chrisitian commentators. He says that Christian commentators have denounced the Sin city as debased and amoral. So what does the movie have to do with God and Christians. To me, I do not believe he stated why or it was not clear enough to show he did.

Then he ends with the whole prediction about what people will think about the movie in the future, he says they will simply just shake their heads. Which is so true. This movies seems eventhough the underlying meaning is important. The movie seems to me like a cheesy, Hollywood movie, that just wanted to make money by gloryfying the violence and killing in it. How many people will really think about the underlying meaning of the movie? People will just watch it because it entertains and they enjoy watching crazy violence and killing. This movie is pointless if you don't understand the meaning of it. So for me, this movie, I will not be planning to watch. And for the movie review, it explained what it was about and the meaning of it. enjoyed the meaning of it not what it is about.


Posted by hqiu at 2007/07/07 21:18:02 PDT
Edited at 2007/07/07 21:41:33 PDT
7/9/07

This is my response to the "Worldview" article.

First of all, lets define what a premise is: which is sentences that form the basis for a piece of reasoning; the premises in an inference are supposed to support the conclusion. So if it is his world premises, then I am suggesting that it is a reason behind the existence of the world and people. In this article, I understand what the author is saying. When he states: "this suffering and misery is not a sad twist of exploitation have caused hunger, suffering and death in the world- it is caused." I believe that, we, humans have caused what the world is of now. He, first, believes that justification can fall into two camps: one where an individual conviction in the universe and another where grounded in reality that goes beyond human convictions. He explains how he is a Christian and that his religious beliefs and their demand upon our conscience. Then he explains the fundamental guilt. I do not understand what the "fundamental guilt" is and so therefore I tend to side to not agreeing with it. Then he goes on the second primise, where the present society is fraught with and founded upon unimaginable human misery and suffering. And as I stated early in the paragraph that the statement of we, humans, are causing the misery and suffering. I agree with this statement because this suffering did not just happen, we caused it by our oppression and exploitation. I also agree with the world primises of where others have far too much than needed but yet we still need more. This is very sad and unfortunate. People that already for the necessities for living, continue to want more. Whereas some earn the money to consume these necessitites, some are unable to obtain due to their living environment and social class they were born in. Especially in some countries, where you can not move up in social classes since you were born in. As in America, you can work your way up the class by hard work.

He summarizes his two premises of the worldview by saying that one there is an ethical grounded in cry of fellow humans to our conscience and that there is ethical absolute is beling violated to a degree. I am confused by this statement. Where I do not know what the certain degree is and it is not explained clearly. He also believes that there are two different distinct categories: right and wrong. He says that our society is in the current stage of wrongness. Here, I do not believe, since not all societies are wrong and some are trying to excel. And not all people are doing wrong, some are trying to change for the better. His third premise is says is that the injustice is constructed and that structures of power, gender, and racial domination are all humanly constructed and can be undone by humans. I do agree with this since we have caused and created the oppression and different structures of power and class. We can change it. But I do not think it is possible since many people would have to be part of changing this. But most people are already influenced by this and will not be willing to change their minds, especially people that are already in power. He states that we need to build a world where each person receives according to their needs and abilities. I am unsure of what the person needs or ables. So therefore, I am concerned with this statement. What if a person needs so many things? They can still not change the world and its "wrongs". He should state what the needs and abilities are. In the end, he concludes that absolute responsibility, fundamental guilt, and genuine hope is the struggling journey from responsibility, guilt to hope and the worldview is a daily and life-long commitment of compassion and justice or what is right. I do agree with part of this statement. But the worldview should not only be this, it should be about self-fulfillement and discovering on true self. Then people might be able to live in harmony. People should drive for what they believe in and continue at it. People need to understand their purpose in life and their purpose in this world, rather than just live it. They should understand the world and beyond. I think, that the worldview is something that is just mysterious and undiscovering. It is just a mystery to everyone, especially why humans exist, what is their purpose is on the world. But with some people they spend all their time trying to discover their purpose and some even go crazy. I believe, there should be less greed and jealous but more love and justice. This is my worldview. In conclusion, I believe in two of his world premises and have also added on. And I am unsure about his first premise of the fundamental guilt.


Posted by hqiu at 2007/07/05 11:54:40 PDT
7/5/07

Exercise 1:
I smile with delighted pride.

-pride
-delight
-dignity
-joy
-pleasure
-happiness
-honor

Exercise 2:
avoid Similes
use metaphors:
list of metaphors:
tangible nouns:
air
tree
pool
water
ocean
beach
mountain
grass
sand
tulip
rose
wind
candy
hat
jacket
jewerly
hair
eyes
light
plane
gun
salt
pepper
cinnamon
ice cream
batter
blindes
fire
wood
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intangible nouns
truth
beauty
goodness
dreams
touch
thoughts
love
hate
anger
jealously
evilness
kindness
caring
feeling
sight
depressed
fear
wisdom
intelligence
--------------------------------------------------
Metaphors:

air of beauty
sight of anger
eyes of truth
smile of love/kindness
candy of pleasure
gun of evil
ocean of beauty
fire of jealously (consumed by, nothing left behind except the smoke)
cloud of dreams
diamond of dreams (refract of many diff. dreams)
sun of joy (spread lots of time)
labrynith (maze) of lies (trapped) (allieration)
"has"
"are"
PUT A BEING VERB BTWN. them

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YELLOW

yellow is bright and happy. It represents the sunny sun that shines so bright and light over the sky everday.
It is delightful. It is summer! Sun gives you a tan and sunburn. Yellow keeps you excited and willing to go to places. And yellow is my bestfriend. It makes me willing to smile and laugh. Places such as China. The yellow represents the skin of asian people. Since we have yellow skin. I think about memories and time I spend with my friends. I think about the beach with the sun hovering over the sand. Sand burning on my feet and the sand. I think about pretty clothes that are bright and shiny. At night, candle light shines brightly and there is laughter and joy spreading around. It makes people laugh and spread the pleasure of happiness.
___________________________________________________________________________________________

CHOCOLATE

chocolate is sweet and loving. It represents caring and kindness. It brings happiness and laughter to people.
It is sugar and brings vibrant energy to life. It accompanies people to joy.

You forgot to capitalize the "c" in la chocolat. You must capatalize because it starts at the beginning of the sentance. You use "it" a lot. Actually chocolate is supposed to make you sleepy but I guess in your opinion it beings vibrant energy to life. You don't have to tell me it's sugar because since it's sweet of course there is sugar. That was very josephy. I like the verbs. For the second sentence maybe you could say "It is an emblem of caring and kindness."

ummmm..urghh
wow. so it does make me happy.

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WATER

water is clear and blue. It is relaxing and soothing. Water swims through your body. It cleanses your soul. it is essential to life. Water is 90% of the earth. It reminds me of oceans with ulmitate ideas. And water is mysterious, where it is unlimited. It is continously moving and unstoppable. Water is a flow of elements.
And it is one of the elements with fire, wood, and wind. It symbolizes trust, love, and beauty. water is cold but has the warmth inside. water of life. Oceans refect the surface of the skies' colors with the blue and red.

Water is clear and blue. the yellows shines on top of the water in the ocean. I am sitting at the beachside, eating chocolate and reading a book. All three objects are somehow in motion. Water is flowing near the beachside. The yellow flowers are moving through the wind. And chocolate is moving in someones hand and being eaten. Cocoa beans grow in Hawaii and are pulled, moved, stored by people.

-laughter
-vibrant energy
-relaxing
-pleasure of happiness
- joy

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The sun of vibrant energy.
The bath relaxes your soul.
When I accomplish a goal, a rush of happiness hits me. And I can not stop smiling.


Posted by hqiu at 2007/07/05 11:54:38 PDT
7/5/07

Exercise 1:
I smile with delighted pride.

-pride
-delight
-dignity
-joy
-pleasure
-happiness
-honor

Exercise 2:
avoid Similes
use metaphors:
list of metaphors:
tangible nouns:
air
tree
pool
water
ocean
beach
mountain
grass
sand
tulip
rose
wind
candy
hat
jacket
jewerly
hair
eyes
light
plane
gun
salt
pepper
cinnamon
ice cream
batter
blindes
fire
wood
------------------------------------

intangible nouns
truth
beauty
goodness
dreams
touch
thoughts
love
hate
anger
jealously
evilness
kindness
caring
feeling
sight
depressed
fear
wisdom
intelligence
--------------------------------------------------
Metaphors:

air of beauty
sight of anger
eyes of truth
smile of love/kindness
candy of pleasure
gun of evil
ocean of beauty
fire of jealously (consumed by, nothing left behind except the smoke)
cloud of dreams
diamond of dreams (refract of many diff. dreams)
sun of joy (spread lots of time)
labrynith (maze) of lies (trapped) (allieration)
"has"
"are"
PUT A BEING VERB BTWN. them

-----------------------------------------------------
YELLOW

yellow is bright and happy. It represents the sunny sun that shines so bright and light over the sky everday.
It is delightful. It is summer! Sun gives you a tan and sunburn. Yellow keeps you excited and willing to go to places. And yellow is my bestfriend. It makes me willing to smile and laugh. Places such as China. The yellow represents the skin of asian people. Since we have yellow skin. I think about memories and time I spend with my friends. I think about the beach with the sun hovering over the sand. Sand burning on my feet and the sand. I think about pretty clothes that are bright and shiny. At night, candle light shines brightly and there is laughter and joy spreading around. It makes people laugh and spread the pleasure of happiness.
___________________________________________________________________________________________

CHOCOLATE

chocolate is sweet and loving. It represents caring and kindness. It brings happiness and laughter to people.
It is sugar and brings vibrant energy to life. It accompanies people to joy.

You forgot to capitalize the "c" in la chocolat. You must capatalize because it starts at the beginning of the sentance. You use "it" a lot. Actually chocolate is supposed to make you sleepy but I guess in your opinion it beings vibrant energy to life. You don't have to tell me it's sugar because since it's sweet of course there is sugar. That was very josephy. I like the verbs. For the second sentence maybe you could say "It is an emblem of caring and kindness."

ummmm..urghh
wow. so it does make me happy.

_-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
WATER

water is clear and blue. It is relaxing and soothing. Water swims through your body. It cleanses your soul. it is essential to life. Water is 90% of the earth. It reminds me of oceans with ulmitate ideas. And water is mysterious, where it is unlimited. It is continously moving and unstoppable. Water is a flow of elements.
And it is one of the elements with fire, wood, and wind. It symbolizes trust, love, and beauty. water is cold but has the warmth inside. water of life. Oceans refect the surface of the skies' colors with the blue and red.

Water is clear and blue. the yellows shines on top of the water in the ocean. I am sitting at the beachside, eating chocolate and reading a book. All three objects are somehow in motion. Water is flowing near the beachside. The yellow flowers are moving through the wind. And chocolate is moving in someones hand and being eaten. Cocoa beans grow in Hawaii and are pulled, moved, stored by people.

-laughter
-vibrant energy
-relaxing
-pleasure of happiness
- joy

--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

The sun of vibrant energy.
The bath relaxes your soul.
When I accomplish a goal, a rush of happiness hits me. And I can not stop smiling.


Posted by hqiu at 2007/06/28 19:18:06 PDT
Swim Meet XD

It was hot and humid as I trudge myself to the pool. I thought in my head: another five hours of waiting to swim and hanging out with friends between events. As I walk into the pool campus, my friends rush to meet me. They graciously tell me they are glad I am here. They drag me to read the events, different strokes and heats I will swim. I write the numbers down with a Sharpie marker. Our coach calls and informs us that practice has started. Warm-ups usually last 15 minutes. The warm-ups prepare you for the real competition, so you can warm up your muscles and swim your hardest. After practice, the whole team is gathered for a cheer. The coaches yell: “Fly, Back, Breast, Free! Every lane, every heat! Every practice, every meet! The Aquacats you just can’t beat!” Swimmers repeat enthusiastically. All the roaring and swimming burst into a roar of laughter and applause. Our team is pumped for the game. I see many swimmers with huge smiles on their faces. Then everyone is silent. The national anthem has started. Everyone turns and faces the flag. Once the song has ended, the meet has begun!

I push away my nervous thoughts and start to prepare for the game. As the swimmers of six and under age-groups start, parents scream at the top of their lungs, cheering and supporting their children. The age group continues to progress. As the announcer starts getting closer to my age group, I quickly sprint to my lane and wait for my turn. The anticipation is intense, as the two competing teams’ scores are close. Nervous thoughts return and I feel insecure, not wanting to swim. A thought whispers in my head, giving me confidence, and I know I can do it. As I step onto the block. I hear my friends, parents, and teammates cheering me on, yelling my name. I place my goggles tightly over my head. My coach, kneels, near the diving board, gives me a few quick words of advice: “Don’t forget tight and quick flip turns!” “Take a breath every three strokes!” Announcer yells: “Swimmer’s take your mark.” “GO!” I leap off the diving board, head first, and I feel the cool water oozing between my toes. Water roars in my ears. My mouth fills with the salty and bitter taste of chlorine. Water rushes down my arms and legs. Adrenaline simulates my muscles. My name is shouted: “Holly!” “Holly!” “Go!” As I dive down into the cool water, I can feel it flowing into my arms and legs. I can hear the water roaring as I swim. I swim my heart out. I feel my muscles aching, but I continue swimming. I touch the wall, I remember my coach telling me: “a tight, quick flip turn.” My legs push off the wall. I reach the wall to finish, panting I stand on the pool’s bottom. I stretch my neck to see the timers push the button and turn my head. I see my time. 36.4 seconds. I knew it I beat my time!

My friends and coach come to congratulate me. I smile with pride. My parents are as excited as I am. I wait for the next event: breaststroke. Breaststroke is my favorite style of swimming and I always love to swim it in every meet. So, I line up in the lane and am psyched to swim breaststroke. The thought of it makes me happy. I step onto the board and dive in after I hear the buzzer. I pull hard-glide and pull hard-glide. I reached the other side of the wall and do a quick turn, this time a two-touch hand turn and push off the wall. I continue to pull hard and glide, breathing every stroke. I quickly gather the last of my energy and sprint to the wall. I see my time: 47.8. I beat my time by a millisecond. I thought to myself: I wish I had gotten a better time. The event has passed and I know I have a long journey ahead of me. I start thinking of new ways I can improve each stroke.


Posted by hqiu at 2007/06/28 10:47:31 PDT
Edited at 2007/06/28 11:31:35 PDT
Swim Meet

Hot and humid as I trudge myself to the pool. Another five hours of waiting to swim and having fun with my friends. I walk to into the pool campus in the baking temperature. I rush to greet my friends. They are graciously tell me they are glad I am there. They drag me to read the events, different strokes and events I am in. I write the numbers down with the a Sharpie marker. Our coach calls us informing us that practice and warm-ups had strated. Warm-ups usually last about fifteen minutes. They prepare you for the real competitition, so you can swim your hardest and warm up your muscles. After practices, the whole team gathered for a cheer. All the roaring and laughing burst into a roar of laughter and applause. Our team is pumped for the game. I see many swimmers enthusiastic to swim.

I, soon, push away my nervous thoughts and start to prepare for the game. As the swimmers of six and under-age groups start, parents scream at the top of their lungs, cheering, and supporting their children. The age group continues to progress. As the announcer starts = getting closer to my age group, I quickly sprint to my lane and wait for my turn. The


Posted by hqiu at 2007/06/28 10:47:31 PDT
Swim Meet

Hot and humid as I trudge myself to the pool. Another five hours of waiting to swim and having fun with my friends. I walk to into the pool campus in the baking temperature. I rush to greet my friends. They are graciously tell me they are glad I am there. They drag me to read the events, different strokes and events I am in. I write the numbers down with the a Sharpie marker. Our coach calls us informing us that practice and warm-ups had strated. Warm-ups usually last about fifteen minutes. They prepare you for the real competitition, so you can swim your hardest and warm up your muscles. After practices, the whole team gathered for a cheer. All the roaring and laughing burst into a roar of laughter and applause. Our team is pumped for the game. I see many swimmers enthusiastic to swim.

I, soon, push away my nervous thoughts and start to prepare for the game. As the swimmers of six and under-age groups start, parents scream at the top of their lungs, cheering, and supporting their children. The age group continues to progress. As the announcer starts = getting closer to my age group, I quickly sprint to my lane and wait for my turn. The

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