Writing for HS, AM (Scalice, '07)
Excercises
Posted by Emilie at 2007/07/05 11:58:36 PDT
zomgahhh :o excercises..

soft: The horizon is a definite line, but still soft.

The horizon is a definite line, but even from a distance it ..

gah. eww :[ whatever.

DEUX.

list of tangible things:

roses.
mint chocolate.
strawberries.
cherries.
blueberries.
ice cream.
glass.
mirrors.
light.
ocean.
eclipse.
catastrophe

list if intangible things:

beauty.
love.
justice.
dreams.
nightmares.
hope.
faith.
destiny.
fate.
intelligence.
avarice.
vanity.
gluttony.
lust.
wrath.
sloth.
life.
death.
chance.

list of.. silly metaphors yay:

the rose of lust.
the strawberries of gluttony.
the mirror of dreams.
a light of hope.
the catastrophe of chance.

seven minute essays:

YELLOW:

Yellow symbolizes happiness and life. It reminds me of lemons and the sun. Yellow is a smooth and soft color that slips through our fingers.

CHOCOLATE:

Chocolate is a milky, brown candy associated with love. It can be a flavor of cake, pie, milk, or ice cream. Chocolate is a universally loved sweet.

Quote:

good job
I LOVE CHOCOLATE!
no comma between milky and brown because there are only two adjectives,
you should check but I don't think there should be a comma before of "or" because it might be the same as the rule for and

Quote:

Yayy thanks Samantha. :] Yeah I should take out the commas. ...

WATER

Water is a clear, pure substance that gives life. It can be cold, hot, or in between. Water is all around you, constantly there and never going away. Even though your environment is hot, water is still inside your body. Without water, living things, including you, would not exist. Water tells you the truth. If there are impurities, you will be able to see them.

Yellow is a color that I am neutral with. Chocolate is a candy that I like, and water is a substance that I need to survive. They are things that I am familiar with, but I do not know a lot about them. I see yellow everyday because the sun is yellow. Chocolate is inside the refrigerator in the home or the local store. Water is in the air around me, in the sink, and in rivers and oceans.

pure, life, everyday, lemons, slips, love, truth.

Everyday, something pure and obvious like love or truth slips past our grasp, and we despair over the loss, but when something as simple as lemons disappears from our life, we take no notice.

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