Writing for HS, AM (Scalice, '07)
Dean Stavropolous
Posted by KStav at 2007/07/18 15:44:22 PDT
writing

Dean Stavropoulos
Mr. Scalice
7/18/07
Analytic Essay

Analytic Essay for America is in the Heart

“America is in the Heart” by Carlos Bulosan is a deep, depressing, and motivating story about a boy named Allos (also called Carlos), and his adventures and hardships of immigrating to the United States. He believes that America will bring more opportunity and overall an easier life, but is disappointed when he learns that America comes with more difficulties and adversities than his homeland, the Philippines. He was not warned that it was almost a crime to be a Philippine in America, and his race was discriminated and given less rights. One of the main reasons Carlos was tempted to immigrate to the United States however, was because of his encounter with Abraham Lincoln, “the poor boy who became president of the United States.” How did Allos’s reading of Abraham Lincoln and Miss Mary Strandon affect his views of the United States and his passion to read and write?
Allos, the main character, is raised in the poorest class of the Philippines in the city of Binalonan. His father owns four hectares of land, and Allos helps his father cultivate the land. He then moves in with his mother to help her with her trading business. It was a struggle for Allos and his mother to travel to faraway cities carrying heavy loads of goods, but Allos knew it had to be done. Allos then decides to move to Baguio all by himself at the age of thirteen to start a new life and try to create new opportunities. He cannot find work there, and he is barely able to make a living in Baguio when a man takes pity on Allos and gives Allos the job of wheeling sacks of rice in exchange for food. As Allos put it, “The wheelbarrow was almost too large for me to push, but it was a job and I had to eat,” (68). He then found a better job when an American woman bought some rice from his employer and asked Allos to carry the sack of rice for her. The lady, known as Miss Mary Strandon, offered him five centavos, and a better job of being a houseboy. Allos accepted.
He starts out doing her general housework, cleaning the apartment and cooking. He then meets Dalmacio who was a houseboy for an other American woman living near by. Dalmacio tries to teach the American language to Allos, when he reads about a “A poor man named Abraham Lincoln.”

“‘Who is this Abraham Lincoln?’ I asked Dalmacio. ‘He was a
poor boy who became a president of the United States,’ he
said. ‘He was born in a log cabin and walked miles and miles
to borrow books so that he would know more about this
country.’ A poor boy became a president of the United States!
Deep down I was touched, was springing out, demanding to be
born, to be given a name. I was fascinated by the story of this
boy who was born in a log cabin and became a president of the
United States.” (69)

Allos becomes deeply interested of Abraham Lincoln, and question Miss Strandon about what Abraham Lincoln did when he became president. Miss Strandon explained that “he said that all men are created equal [but] some men, vicious men, who had Negro slaves, did not like what he said [so] a terrible war was fought between the states of the United States, and slaves were freed and the Union was preserved. But one night, he was murdered by an assassin.” (70).
Soon, Allos was extremely fascinated with Abraham Lincoln. Miss Strandon began giving him books and a passion for books was embedded in Allos. Allos eventually finds work in the library nearby and works there for more than a year. Miss Mary Strandon leaves for Iowa, and tells Allos that she hopes he visits her in Iowa. It is then mentioned fifteen years afterwards, Allos goes to Spencer, Iowa to find her, but she had been dead for almost ten years, and Allos wrote her name on a copy of his first book and donated it to the local library.
Allos’s reading of Abraham Lincoln becoming president affected his views of America dramatically. “A poor boy became a president of the United States” ran through his mind countless times, and this represented opportunity in America. He saw America as a place where he could exceed, and if he worked extremely hard, he could rise to the top, and become rich. He wasn’t warned of all the harms, of the crime of being a Philippine, of the drug dealing and gambling, and of the actually very little opportunity. Abraham Lincoln was a representation of what Allos wanted to live and experience, and his readings of Abraham not only affected his views of America, it persuaded him to immigrate to America. Abraham Lincoln becoming president was an indication to Allos that any person could be anything they wanted.

“I do not remember all that Miss Mary Strandon said to me in
parting. But I remember her saying that she would like me to
come someday to her home town of Spencer, Iowa. She told
me that the trees there were as luxuriant as in Baguio.
Fifteen years afterward I went to Spencer, hoping to find her.
But she had been dead for more than ten years. I wrote her name
on a copy of my first book and donated it to the local library.
I think someday she would have been happy to know that
I would someday write a book about her country.” (71)

The writing from demonstrates that Miss Mary Strandon and his encounter with Abraham Lincoln played a big role in Allos’s passion for reading and writing. Dalmacio was the one to introduce reading to Allos, but the Abraham Lincoln story brought in zest for reading, and from there, Miss Strandon got him involved with the library.
Miss Mary Strandon was incredible for Allos. Allos had respect for her, not only because she was kind and had a great personality, but because she cared. Miss Mary Strandon triggered Allos’s passion for reading and writing. Miss Strandon also played a major role for Allos immigrating to America. He believed that America was like Miss Strandon, and overall an amazing place. As explained in the book, Allos wrote a book when he was older and dedicated it Miss Mary Strandon.
Miss Mary Strandon and the reading of Abraham Lincoln made him believe America was great, but was proven wrong immediately when he was sent to Alaska for hard labor. But, Miss Mary Strandon started Allos’s writing career, and helped him become the great writer that he became at the end of the book.


Posted by KStav at 2007/07/16 10:45:59 PDT

Why did they go through the Waid?
Because Maria was being tested if she could live in teh rural area so she goes throug a mountainous and fieldy way and htre low way instead of the high road
Did they see anybody on teh way- asked by the father
How old is Baldo?
Why was their needed permission for Maria to scratch Labang's head?
Why was their not really a conclusion to the story?
Why does Maria call Leon Noel?
What is carretela?
Why does Balgo resis telling Noel why he was gowing through teh Waid in the beggining?
Why is father so curious what Maria did and if she sang with Noel?
Where was Baldo, Noel, and Maria comeing from?
"He did not say Maring. He did not say Mayang. I knew them that he had always called her Maria and that to us all she would be Maria; and in my mind I said 'Maria' and it was a beautiful name" (5) Why does this matter?
Leon turns into Noel to make the name sound Urban
What is the significance of teh song Noel sings?
Will Maria fit in?
yes...father accepts her
Themes: are between progress and backwardness and rural and city
Question: What do city and country mean for Bulosan and Arguilla in these stories
Argument: City is affected countryside in a bad way because city is more modern, countryside is not adapting to modernity, for maria, city adaptgin to countryside

For Arguilla, the city adapts to teh country in teh person of Maria
For Bulosan, Country is adapting to the city in teh person of Carlos

theme like marriage, tradition and old customs which is opposite in both stories, America
make into question
argument

Theme: America
Question: How is America a good and bad place, What does America mean for Bulosan


Posted by KStav at 2007/07/11 14:51:15 PDT
Sin City

To start, I think that the producers and writers of the film try to explore another part of the world today; a part that most people in this class do not live in. He is trying to show that people have a bloody, brutal, and terrorizing side to them, yet I do not think that everyone does. Yes, everyone indeed has a "bad" side, a part of them that is naughty and cruel, but we have this because we are humans, and that side helps build humans. But, most of us do no had a "killing with the chainsaw, cutting of part of the human anatomy" side to us, and even though few may lust to cause someone to go through that kind of pain, ever less people have the willingness to actually do some kind of action. If I had a decision to watch the movie or not, I wouldn't just because it can be rgued that movies like these is what makes the world a more brutal place, and humans follow the actions they see in movies. I could stand through the murders and blood, but I would probably not be interested. "we are in touch with the darker side of life, if only in fantasy. This is liberating stuff. We don’t censor ourselves. This is human nature, brutish and cruel." I do not understand why the writers have to focus on this side of life. We humans focus on more bad than good, hear of all the brutal murders but do not hear about a hero who saved another persons life. We hear about rapes and the Iraq situation but do not hear about justice nor good.

But, I understand that there can be an argument. Many people do love brutal movies, like 300, where is almost shown in every seen.. But, i think that hte target for the people to watch the movie are teenagers, and I understand that I am a teenager as well. But sin city, as written in the review, is almost all about killings, and I don't think a teenager would want to watch Sin City. Yet, if I was to watch the movie, I would be interested to find out what the whole point of the movie is actually about, for I am sure there has to be a deeper than mass murders and revenge by brutal death. Another movie written by the same author, Kill Bill, was very uninteresting, and I did not like the weird seens. I think maybe their might have also beena deeper meaning to that movie, but we teenagers in common day want to see action and weapons and a good plot.


Posted by KStav at 2007/07/07 20:20:19 PDT
Edited at 2007/07/08 13:26:44 PDT
persuasive essay

Mr. Scalice's main focus is to set the point that the world is overall in a bad conscience. Mr. Scalice incorporates countless doings people have put upon themselves to make the world a worst place. He sums his worldview perfectly when he writes "Right and wrong are very real [categories], and our present society is unspeakably in the wrong." I am mostly persuaded because his points come with detailed explanations that completely support his views. He explains the different bads in the world, and makes the readers think what kind of world we live in. For instance, he explains that there are people starving in the world while filthy rich people spend hundreds of dollars on champagne, and the way those two thoughts fuse with each other have the readers thinking how self centered some people are. But, Mr. Scalice puts me in confusion because he is trying to convince us readers that the whole world is in terror and dreadful, and everybody makes the world a terrible place. He does not give exception for the minority of hte public who go out of their way to help those in need, and do what every moral human being with a surplus of money should do.
I believe that the quote from Jose Porfirio Miranda caps off Mr. Scalice's point perfectly. Miranda writes in a simple manner that people are self-centered and push bad instances and doings further and further to the point when killing will be deemed okay. But, I believe that this quote is too over the top: “[We will have] in Sartre's words, ‘the feeling that we have the fundamental right to kill.’" I believe that doing this sets us readers a little out of focus because of its nature, and I do not believe that this will happen.
In summarization, Mr. Scalice's worldview is that we are living in a world of "bad", and people need to try harder to make things right, to care for one another, to help the hungry, to not be so self-centered, and to do what people know is right.
If I was to write an essay on my worldview, my worldview would side and be on the contrary of Mr. Scalice's worldview. He tends to show that human beings are doing bad, and are shaping the world into a destructive place. My worldview would be that most people are "good", but do "bad" things sometimes that shape the world into a worst place. My worldview would state that there are only some filthy rich beings, people who have more than they need, that make the world hopeless in being a great place for everyone to live in because they have much more than human’s basic necessities, and they should give up some their "things" such as money and clothes to those who can barely survive, those who live on the floors of street corners, those who work everyday to make less than a dollar, and those who overall can barely meet the necessities for life. I would also blame the government. In the case of the U.S. government, every year they make it harder and harder to live in the United States, raise taxes, and do not use enough tax money to support those in need. In conclusion to my worldview, many people are spoiled and do not even know it, have ten pairs of shoes when many people out of the United States cannot afford to buy one pair, and I believe that every person with a house and with satisfactory living conditions should find it in the goodness of their hearts to pay at least an extra few dollars a month to help support those in need, so everyone can meet their necessities, and more and more people can start enjoying the beauty and happiness that God brings to Earth.
In my opinion though, there is one and only one reason that the world is turning more and more into a disgusting place: MONEY. Money drives the whole world, makes and breaks people decides if people live on the streets or live in house, and drives people to become selfish, self centered, and greedy. Almost every human done disaster has been feuled by money. If the world should become better, this needs to stop. The lust of money is the center of the world today, the lust for love and politeness should become the center of the world tomorrow. This can be done, as Christopher Reeve once put it, "Nothing is impossible." Everyone has to want the change, and though working and money runs the world, love and joy should drive a person.
Though Mr. Scalice lusts for receiving only the necessities needed to survive, this is virtually impossible, for competition is what also drives the world. Those who work hard succeed, those who do not fail. Only the fittest succeed.


Posted by KStav at 2007/06/28 11:22:45 PDT
Descriptive essay

My father cautiously drives up the rocky, dirt road. He parks the dusty Honda in a circular pit, cleared of all grasses and trees. As I open the door, ans immediate breeze of fresh air with a light scent of sweetened pine combs rushes in through the car. I fit on my dusty, tan hiking shoes, and the shoes almost do not fit me; I had not been hiking in years. I stand up, and glimpse around while stretching my sore hands and legs; it has taken nearly three hours to arrive to this point, high in the mountains in the middle of nowhere. The trees sorrounding the thin road stands tall as if the trees are holding up the blue sky, and the thick, greenish-yellowish grass folds over because of its tall but skinny build. The shadows of the sunlight reveal the tiny specks of dust in the air swiveling crazily in no direect direction, and reflect off the seeral tree branches. Huge grayish boulders larger than our car lay around a tree to the left of me, while to my right, I notice a thin dirt trail, covered with dried up leaves and surrounded with tiny pebbles. The trail goes into the wild forest, twists to the left, and coils around a couple of large trees that are swaying in the gentle wind. The warm, summer day brings with it a couple of thin cloulds, and an unpredictable breeze, blowing harshly one hour, gently whispering the next. I have a cotton, blue sweater on just in case the wind hit hard, and I wear torn up jeans, along with my hiking shoes. I hear mountain lions howling to each other, birds chirping, and the gentle movement of the grass dancing back and forth .The howsl of the mountain lions scare me for a bit, but I eventaully forget about their presence. My father then calls my name and tells me we are ready to hike.

As my father leads me, he enters on the dirt trail that was originally to my right. I pick up an erect stick about three-forths of my size, and use it support me up through the unpredictable trail. The trail winds left and then curves right. As I walk, the liely forest becomes darker and darker; the trees around me are so thick that only thin beans light our way, at 3:00 o'clock in the afternoon! As my father and I walk, we both watch our step carefully; the one dirt trail has turned into a light grassy trail, and at times, it seems the trail has vanished, but comes back to appear a few feet in some direction. Most of the trail starts to move uphill, and I ecome less focused on my surrounding. Sweat start to fllow in my hair and drip son my clothes. My exhaused legs start to ache, and i quickly stop to catch my breath.

All of a sudden, my father turns around quickly and puts his tremlbing finger to his mouth. I suddenly freeze but move my immense eyes cautiously arund. And then I spot it. To the right in the corner of my eye appears a huge darkish-yellowish spot. I can not make out the figure, but as it soon ventures in front of us, I stay as still as can be, only hearing my hard breaths. It is a mountain lion. I can feel the sweat starting to flow faster thn ever. All of a sudden, one drop of sweat hits my shoe. The mountain lion slowly turns its head left. I look into its eyes for a split second. They are greenish-yellowish. The eyes look so determined to catch a prey and to have a big feast tonight. The mountain lion is about six feet in length, but it paws are extremely long and sharp. Its yellow coat is filled with a wave of bugs. its teeth were unbelievably sharp, and its saliva dripping to the ground makes me uncomfortable. The mountain lion, now only standing thirty feet in front of us keeps its face focused on me. I recite a payer in my head, knowing they can be my last thoughts I ever think. The mountain lion snickers, turns its head back into its normal position, and slowly trots away.

We stay until the mountain lion is out of sight. My flabbergasted father takes a deep breath and asks if we should go back. After quic thought, I tell him we should move on, that we did onot drive three hours to hike for less than an hour and a half of hiking. We move forawrd, up the trail.

My father, who has been on this trail may times before, tells me we are almost there. I am relieved, for this unforgettable hike chas come with many hardships, but I don't exactly understand where we are heading. As we hike up farther and farther, the sun seems to be falling in the thick trees, but suddently, more sunlight starts to appear. Finally, when we can go no higher, my father takes me off trail. We hike down through arough hill and through wide. I can hear the rushing of something, the sound of spalttering. I becoem excited, and as I walk though the last bush, I see it. Water harshly runs through rocks down the muontain. The river curves around a huge rock, and makes a sharp right turn about a half-mile down. I can feel the tinkles of water hit my body, which is big relief from the strenuous work done ot reach this point. There is a deep, green grass in all sides of the river, and the sun shines rightly down. Birds chrip in the trees above, and colorful fish gallop out of the water and die back in. I sit on a large patch of grass and just watch. Everythingi about the site is beautiful; a memory ot remember. From the feeling of water refreshing me, to the view, to the sound of liveliness, thhis is truly a once in a lifetiem experience.

The sun is falling each minute. it was 6:00 o'clock and it is time to head back. We fight through the tough wilderness and head back onto the trail. As we venture back, our struggle is less, because we move downhill. The sound of birds chirping has now vanished, and the only thing that helps us keep on trail are our foots steps, engraved into the somewhat moist dirt. It is difficult to see my surroundings, because the sun has fellen low, not behind the mountaiins yet, but behindi the towering trees. Driving home I fall asleep. I dream about the livelliness of the forest as I stepped out of the car, being surrounded by a forest in the middle of nowherem hearing birds chiripng, mountain lions howling, trees standing tall; I relived the memory. I then dreamed about that very moment where I saw the river following down the mountain, the colorful fish galloping otu and driving back in, the green grasses, and the harsh water running down the mountain. The experience was truly a once in a lifetime experience. Everyday, our lies are surrounded with human built objects, but only on our very best days do we visualize the elegance of the world, what God has given to the world, to humans.

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